Free Mr Mime

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    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QW-PavEQ6F4

    A really short short film.
    Is the set to cluttered? Is the focus too wierd?

    #441515
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    There should be more time to read the captions, especially as the font is an old letterform (I once read that you should allow enough time to read captions twice over).
    When the mime is freed, he smiles so briefly that it looks like a mistake. Either have him smile for longer, or don’t bother. The sets are OK – personally, I’d rather see a cluttered set than a bare one. Didn’t notice the focus, so I guess it couldn’t have been too weird! Is there going to be a Part 2?

    #441516
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    Your critique* is correct and taken to hearth. :-) (*Is that the correct word?)
    No, I did not plan this to be a series. But never say never “they” say.

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    ‘Heart’ is the correct word. ‘Hearth’ is part of a house where you have an open fire…

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