Free Mr Mime

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August 4, 2014 at 10:35 am #441403
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Morten

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QW-PavEQ6F4

A really short short film.
Is the set to cluttered? Is the focus too wierd?

August 23, 2014 at 12:57 pm #441515
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There should be more time to read the captions, especially as the font is an old letterform (I once read that you should allow enough time to read captions twice over).
When the mime is freed, he smiles so briefly that it looks like a mistake. Either have him smile for longer, or don’t bother. The sets are OK – personally, I’d rather see a cluttered set than a bare one. Didn’t notice the focus, so I guess it couldn’t have been too weird! Is there going to be a Part 2?

August 23, 2014 at 2:48 pm #441516
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Your critique* is correct and taken to hearth. :-) (*Is that the correct word?)
No, I did not plan this to be a series. But never say never “they” say.

August 24, 2014 at 1:21 pm #441521
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‘Heart’ is the correct word. ‘Hearth’ is part of a house where you have an open fire…

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