"It Happened on Brick Avenue" – my first

This is my first attempt at a brickfilm. It's the story of boy meets girl, girl ignores boy, boy does what anyone should to really win a (worthwhile) girl. I've only shared it with non-LEGO people (and whoever they showed it to). But I'd like the opinion of all ya'll ├╝ber-LEGO brickfilm fans. Thanks. http://youtu.be/JeiHv27JIqU