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September 8, 2009 at 8:38 am #409687
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The Doctor

‘Scuse the double post.

I’m reading through it right now and making notes which I shall post when I’m done. Any IM Badger?

September 8, 2009 at 6:59 pm #409689
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badgerboy

AIM, I’m not on much though. It’d probably be easier to PM me or tell me to get in the chat if we’re ever on at the same time.

September 22, 2009 at 3:16 am #409842
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BrickLord

How close are you two(meaning the Doc and badger) to being done with the script?

September 22, 2009 at 4:08 am #409843
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The Doctor

I’ve been slowly reviewing it, I’ve been busy with school

September 22, 2009 at 7:23 pm #409867
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badgerboy

I’m hoping to start rewrites by the end of the month. Right now we’re collecting our thoughts on each other’s parts and deciding what should be changed.

EDIT: Doc, I’d appreciate it if you could hurry up. At the rate you’re going, we’ll be finished with the script by the time you read the first draft.

September 22, 2009 at 9:07 pm #409871
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The Doctor

“badgerboy” wrote: Doc, I’d appreciate it if you could hurry up. At the rate you’re going, we’ll be finished with the script by the time you read the first draft.

I know, I know. Please understand that I’m busy though, I’ll try and get at least part one reviewed today

September 23, 2009 at 3:43 am #409887
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BrickLord

I know, I know. Please understand that I’m busy though, I’ll try and get at least part one reviewed today

Just remember today ends at 12:00 pm :lol: !

September 23, 2009 at 5:33 am #409889
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So I’ve reviewed part uno and here’s what I have to say about it…

PAGE 4:

“Josh rolls over to look at his assailant…
It’s his MOTHER… long gray hair, glasses, and cruel. She
glares down at him.”

I don’t believe she should be wearing glasses, from what I understand so far (I’m only on page four lol) this is a poverty stricken family living in a medevil-fantasy period. I doubt people such as they would own a pair of glasses, unless I’m missing something…

PAGE 5:

“Josh, lying in bed, is awoken by the sound of a ROOSTER’S
CROWING.”

I can’t help but imagin something humorous being added here, like a repeating gag where Josh wakes up in some humorous fashion in response to the rude awakening by the rooster, or have someone throw an object at the rooster through a window and another morning maybe he could catch it and throw it back :-P

PAGE 14:

With Josh and the soldier’s constant “You’ll find out”, I reckon this should be extended so it continues in a comical fashion as the soldier takes Josh away.

PAGE 15:

Can we make the King gay(ish) do you reckon? :-P
Josh could also jokingly mock the king’s gayness by sarcastically mimicking the way he talks

PAGE 18:

Dash should slap Josh on the back with “That’s the spirit, kid!”

I really like Dash, I keep envisioning Lord Flash Heart from the Black Adder BBC series and I think he should be modeled off him just without the inuendoes :P

September 23, 2009 at 11:56 am #409891
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FLIPaBRIK

[quote="The Doctor"]
Can we make the King gay(ish) do you reckon? :-P
Josh could also jokingly mock the king’s gayness by sarcastically mimicking the way he talks

/quote]

hmm, i think we shouldn’t. i think there are enough movies where the king is commical, i think he should be the serious one… imo.

-FLIP

September 23, 2009 at 3:09 pm #409899
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BrickLord

Can we make the King gay(ish) do you reckon? :-P
Josh could also jokingly mock the king’s gayness by sarcastically mimicking the way he talks

Which meaning so you mean? If you mean happy and care-free, then yeah. If the other meaning…Heck NO :x .

September 23, 2009 at 4:05 pm #409902
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FLIPaBRIK

I def agree with brickLord, i think it would be more enjoyable to not have that added to it.

-FLIP

September 23, 2009 at 4:14 pm #409906
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BrickLord

Remember, Doc, we are targeting young kids! That would really hurt the movie even if we were aiming for older kids. My parents wouldn’t allow me to help with this project if we did that.

September 23, 2009 at 7:32 pm #409915
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Squash

Can we make the King gay(ish) do you reckon? :-P
Josh could also jokingly mock the king’s gayness by sarcastically mimicking the way he talks

Hmm, I thought in his current form he was quite jovial. If you meant homosexual- while I don’t mind having a character in a film that is homosexual, I don’t know if we should do anything that would draw attention away from what the King is saying at this point, as it’s quite important to the rest of the film. Especially so if there is no real purpose behind it, or it doesn’t add to the story.
I’m not comfortable peddling gay stereotypes as well, and I don’t know for certain, but some may find this type of thing offensive to their culture. I really think we would be best avoiding the idea.

September 23, 2009 at 7:58 pm #409916
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The Doctor

Point taken :P

September 23, 2009 at 8:09 pm #409917
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BrickLord

some may find this type of thing offensive to their culture.

A LOT of people, not just a few.

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