My first movie: The man with the cane

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    dandenmark
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    This is my first film, called the man with the cane. It’s barely a minute, so I can’t make much of a teaser. I’ll just say that the thing that I’m ashamed of the most is the lighting.

    Here’s the link:

    http://brickshelf.com/gallery/smallscalestudios/brickfilms/manwithcane.wmv

    Enjoy, I hope. :)

    oh yeah, turn up your sound. The only sound is music, and it’s kinda soft.

    #3877 Reply

    That was great!
    Simple, yet elegant!
    The snow and trees were great- the animation was good and I thought the lighting was fine. The best part for me was the camera angles- well done!
    Criticism? The wheels didn’t turn when the car was moving.

    An outstanding first effort!
    Are you gonna enter it in the Brickfest Music Video Contest?

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    dandenmark
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    hey, good point! It never registered in my mind as a music video. How do I enter?

    and yes, that was a drawback. I was trying to have the trees move instead of the car, but I forgot to make the wheels moving.

    #3883 Reply
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    DarkRAM
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    Nice job! I liked it… :)

    #3885 Reply

    hey, good point! It never registered in my mind as a music video. How do I enter?

    http://www.brickfilms.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=473

    #3886 Reply
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    legotronn
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    Never Mess With A Man That Has A Cane.

    :lol: Dandenmark, your very good for a start! VERY VERY GOOD! Keep the films rolling. :lol:

    LEGOTRONN, who recently changed his signature. :lol:

    #3887 Reply
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    The Janitor
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    Nice. Definitely above average for a first film, especially in the animation itself. It was pretty smooth. I also liked the camera angles a lot. I also liked the use of the Beethoven music.

    The other think I liked a lot: I could tell what was going on. Most short, silent brickfilms are quite confusing to me, either because the animation is so bad, the camera is going all over the place, or it is just a poorly planned film. But this one was very easy to understand.

    Good job. I look forward to more of your films.

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    Kyle
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    nice job! looking forward to another film. :)

    #3916 Reply
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    Yolegoman
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    “legotronn” wrote:

    Never Mess With A Man That Has A Cane.

    :lol: Dandenmark, your very good for a start! VERY VERY GOOD! Keep the films rolling. :lol:

    LEGOTRONN, who recently changed his signature. :lol:

    That sounds sorta like one of my sigs a few months ago…

    No hard feelings! :)

    #3933 Reply
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    Motfilms
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    Very good for a first film! The animation was nice, and I have never seen a brickfilm with snow before, so this movie stands out to me. (I know there are other brickfilms with snow, like ACCIB, that’s too big for my dial-up )
    Keep up the good work!

    Tom

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