My script

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October 5, 2011 at 11:52 am #413502
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Mr Finch

Hey guys! My name is Mr Finch, just want to let you have a look at my new script I’m making

WHEN WORLDS COLLIDE

A man wakes up, we see him rub his head, he has a suit on with a black tie and black trousers

(The man) Ow, my head.

We look around to see him looking round at the scenery.

He gets up and starts walking around dizzily and groaning and moaning and talking to himself

the man: Jake where the heck have you got yourself into now?

He starts running, and bumps into a man crossing the street, with a tattoo on his chest, Jake thinks he will get punched.

Jake: Look man I’m sorry about bumping into you, please don’t hurt me!

Gruff man: Hey there’s no harm, I’m not going to hit you my dear friend

Jake looks at the man strangely

JAKE: Okay….

The man starts walking away, Jake looks back at the man and bumps into a very happy man with a Soccer shirt on that says number 10 on it.

Jake: Oh I’M SORRY ABOUT THAT i seem to be bumping into people today!

sweating nervously Jake watch’s as the man replies

hAPPY MAN: oH I’m sorry for bumping into you my friend, please I am so so sorry

Jake is thinking that something is not right.

Jake:Look mAN IT’S FINE, CAN I ASK YOU SOMETHING?

HAPPY MAN: Yeah sure.

Jake:are you in anyway high?

Happy man looks at Jake

happy man:of course not! here in new york world we have strived to remain drug free for you see drugs are harmful for us lego citizens.

Jake walks on taking in all the surroundings

jake:wait a second, did he say new york world?

Turning round he shouts to the happy man walking off

jake:hey! did you say New york world????

HAPPY MAN: YES,TAKE A LOOK AT ALL THE BUILDINGS WE HAVE, AND LOOK AT THE LIBRARY FOR HISTORY ON THE PLACE!

JAKE:OKAY THANKS!

Walking towards the big library, he goes in and and looks for a book and news paper cuttings about anything going on, Jake realizes something strange going on.

jake: weird there are no arcticals before the year 2000,tHE FIRST CUT OUT IS A TERRIOST ATTACK ON NEW YORK, BUT PEOPLE CAUGHT THEM BEFORE THEY HIJACKED ANYTHING, FIRST OF ALL IT’S THE WRONG YEAR AND THEY DID NOT CATCH THEM…

Looking even closer he finds out that after the caught terriosts were planning to take over the world, then they found out that they were planning to take down the world leaders.

We see Jake get up and walk out onto the street, he turns round to see the happy man from earlier bumping into the Jake again.

happy man: hello again, did you enjoy your vist to the library?

jake: yeah, kind of.

Jake looks at Happy man

happy man:sir, are you okay?

Jake looked around him in the distance he sees VERY smiler surroundings, Empire state building, in the distance he sees the statue of liberty. The thing is we Jake look puzzlingly at the two buildings just down the street.

jake:that’s not right…

without a care in world the twin towers are still standing!

happy man: sir, are you alright?

jake:no, i am not alright, i think i know whats going on…

we see a white flash of light, Jake is sitting down on a chair 5 people are around him

man 1: Look we need you to do this

jake: so you want me to kill people?

man 2: NO! We need you to get five people. Just do it or we kill your family

The white flash comes back again, Jake looks a Happy man and says

jake:i’m so sorry.

Jake pulls out a gun and says to the guy on the other end of his mobile phone

jake: i’ve got one!

A bright light comes on the screen, The happy little man is now a confused little man

happy man: where am i?

Jake looks round at the warehouse

jake:Yeah, I know where we are.

A man came over to them, mouthful of gold teeth, with a orange jacket on with matching pair of trousers, with him were two ( by the look of things) thugs standing next to him.

goldtooh: jake hall, i see you only got 1 of the five we needed

Jake we can see is now worried

jake:Yes I did Goldtooth sir, and I’m not going back.

Goldtooth pulled out a gun,

goldtooth: Look pal, we have your family hidden somewhere and inside it is a bomb as soon as i give the signal, they die.

Jake got up, tired of being pushed around

jake: LOOK, I AM TIRED OF BEING PUSHED AROUND. NOW LISTEN TO ME

Jake pulls out a gun

Goldtooth’s thugs jump on Jake,

goldtooth: mr hall, thats not a good idea.

goldtooth: you four!

pointing to four thugs sitting about.

goldtooth: go over to the over side, anyone tries to stop you… kill them.

JAKE: no! don’t do that at all you piece of…

goldtooth: MR HALL! ENOUGH! NOW FOR THAT OUT BURST YOUR COMING WITH US AND TAKE YOUR BOYFRIEND AS WELL…

Happy man looks at Goldtooth

happy man: hello sir, my names larry and well we are not that type of minifigure…

Goldtooth looks at Larry.

goldtooth WELL ‘LARRY’ SHUT UP!

10 figures get into a small machine, it looks like a kind of box. A bright light blinds Larry.

goldtooth: Ben you go that way, and harry you go that way [giving them both guns] and larry and jake you come with me with the 5 others…

10 minutes later the group were near the liabary that Jake went in to eariler, 5 LEGO men were standing near a Policeman.

policeman: look calm down please, there were only 2 casualtys so far.

jake[whisper]: What the heck happend?

Goldtooth gets his gun out, cocks it

goldtooth: people put your hands up right now

all the people turn round in shock,the policeman looks flustterd.

policman: freeze! you under arrest!

Jake sighs.

policeman:i said get down [pulling out a gun]

Goldtooth [sigh]: Boys will you do the honor?

Pulling out their guns, the ‘boys’ started shooting people

JAKE:STOP THIS PLEASE! .

Out of the 6 people standing there, only one remained. And that was the Policeman.

policeman: look please, don’t shoot. ALL I WAS DOING WAS TRYING TO CALM PEOPLE DOWN

jake: why?

Jake looks up for the first time, in the distance buildings were on fire, with a expulsion a building starts collapsing

JAKE: run! run like heck!!

They jump into a house window.

it goes dark and the house shudders. Jake goes over to the radio. He swtiches the radio on.

RADIO: AFTER A FLASH OF LIGHT TTHREE BUILDINGS WERE DAMAGED IN THE PROCESS. ONLY TWO BODIES HAVE BEEN FOUND. BREAKING NEWS!!! ONE OF THE BUILDINGS HAS JUST COLLPASED! IT MAY AFFECT THE…. PSHHHHHHHH!

The radio was useless now, only static was coming from it.

jake: look the dust has stopped!

Going outside they see dust EVERYWHERE!

Cars are covered in dust, we see a couple of Goldtooth’s henchmen laying on the ground, groaning.

goldtooth: get up you two, We can’t messabout, the whole city could collpse.

Jake is still in the house, he picks goes onto the computer the people have got in their house.

He looks up on the history on the city,using his skills he finds a artical which reads

Earth close to war! General Smith has warned the whole Earth that the world is at war and nuclear strikes could happen in a matter of months .

jake: hmm, i never seen that before…

Below the newspaper article, he finds a advert about a Doctor called Doctor Granger.

Jake goes out of the house, Goldtooth is now talking to his henchmen.

Jake: We have to go to Doctor Granger’s place

Goldtooth turns around

Goldtooth: really? I never knew you were the leader here, Shut up okay? I’m the leader here now okay?

walking around they see 2 police cars racing round, their sirens screaming away. The police stop them

POLICEMAN: STAY THERE!

Jake starts running!

goldtooth: comeback here you moron! Your mom as a mega block!

Jake stops, he starts walking back

jake: what did you call my mom????

pulling out a gun and shoots two of the thugs, Goldtooth looks worried.

goldtooth: look mr hall, don’t make any hasty decisions. remember your Girlfriend could be a deadfriend in a minute.

Jake shoots two more down.

Goldtooth: Now, your gonna pay.

Goldtooth gets out a mobile phone

goldtooth: do it! do it now!!!!

Jake drops the gun as he hears a explosian.

Jake: NOOO! Right thats it!

Jake turns round to leave and the white light happens again

September 12, 2012 at 2:57 am #417350
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Anton

You have a creative mind buddy. A true sign of talent!

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