June 9, 2003 at 2:17 am #4681
Finally, after hours out of days out of weeks of toiling, I’ve managed to stuff this thing into Premiere, stuff it into a more suitable package, throw it into brickshelf, and create a link to the box. I have a long way to go with Premiere and Brickshelf. Oh well, at least it’s here.
please note that in some parts there is a lack of audio, and that is because the voices were accidentaly destroyed. But hey, at least there’s something to watch.
DanJune 9, 2003 at 2:29 am #4683
YolegomanParticipantJune 9, 2003 at 3:04 am #4686
IndyAParticipantJune 9, 2003 at 5:38 am #4701June 9, 2003 at 11:12 am #4706
The film was good. BUT,
here’s some tips for improvement’s.
When it became night you could have used a transition so it didn’t look like it did. So sudden. You got the point but a transition had helped.
When the man walked it went very quick. To animate someone walking up a stair requieres a lot of work, but if you take the time it looks a lot better. It’s pretty hard to make it look nice too. I’ve tried
The lighting wasn’t steady and made it a bit *ææh* when you had put on the dark.
The background you used had a bit too light blue colour. Mayby it should have been a bit darker. To have a nice-looking sky is also hard
You had some really nice cameraangels and I liked the music 😀
The final words was cool 😎 although I guessed some of it 😀June 9, 2003 at 8:43 pm #4727
MotfilmsParticipantJune 11, 2003 at 4:07 pm #4896
The car crash was cool! lol
Good for a second film, I agree with minifigstudios, a transition from day to night would have helped a little. Also, if there were originally voices in there I would’ve kept them out anyway because it makes the scene a little more interesting really. I’ve been wanting to do a silent for some time now, now if I can just find the time… lol 😛
All in all, good job.June 11, 2003 at 4:10 pm #4898
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