Probably not long, let’s say October?

Wait.

Not nothing. We’re still revising the script.

I don’t know what The Doctor has up his sleeve as far as things to do before the casting call. But I don’t think there’s much else to do until the script is finished.

I’ve already got a list in the script thread.

There aren’t any minor characters on it, though. I suppose that could wait as they may change as we’re revising the script.

All custom text you’d be writing the equivalent of almost 924 bibles. is it not a problem with the 924 bibles?

__________________
Writing jobs

Ok, so I’ve read through part 2. I came up with a really good voice for the Queen

Only really three points this time,

PAGE 17

Dash: “I’m no knight. I wish I were
liked. I wish I were brave.”

This line is just SCREAMING for a song to follow, anyone up to writing one?

PAGE 22

When Jesse sets Eddy free, I think he should simply go “eww” or “augh” and bolt cartoon style with that richet sound as he dashes off.

PAGE 31

With the spider,

Rasputin: “No! More! MONSTERS!”

I think Rasputin should be ontop of the spider rodeo style again and hitting it with the sword with each word to really emphasize it and it finally “explodes” on the last hit and we see him sitting in a pile of spider guts while it rains spider bits and he’s like “…eww”

With these two moster duels, they seem a little too close together. We should either cut out all but the spider OR we could keep them all by making it somewhat comical. The characters seem to have a bit of a heart-to-heart before and between each monster, we could have music for the mood which suddenly changes with a record scratching sound to suitable battle music and the back again the same way for each battle.

We had some ideas about changing stuff with the scene with the hunter attacks, but I’d have to look them up to see what they were. I’ll let you know what they are when I find them.