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or maybe some of them could have like a human arm left or something.
That’d be a little grotesque.
I would say that she would have hair.
Also, I’m in favor of cutting the sister and adding the skeleton. Agree or disagree? Or do you just want to cut both?
I definitely don’t want to take the focus off of the four biggies (Josh, Dash, Rasputin, Edward) but I also feel like the skeleton would make an interesting character and help advance the plot. The sister only serves as an extra external conflict (Josh vs. sister) and internal conflict (sister vs. sister’s morality), and she doesn’t help advance the main plot. I also feel like she would steal some of the spotlight from Josh.
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