I’ll try to. I’ll probaly post it around 9 pm EST, if I can get on the computer, if not, I’ll post it at school the next day.

Perhaps, and this is just an idea with scripting, I coukld script the battle cesnes in a stroyboard like fashion, though I have no figres that would fit the theme, I caould always use my pirate swords and lightsabers as represenative

Setting: A cold, dark room, filled with mist, sword on wall

Characters: Jasen: A teenage Jedi Apprentice, present at destruction of Elxmri
Hrothgr: 14 year old Bothan, Jasen’s best friend

Jasen standing in middle of room, Hrothgr walks in
Hrothgr: Stops a few feet away from Jasen What are you doing here, Jasen? Points at Jasen You’re needed in the debriefing room. You’re the only one wh-!
Jasen: angrily Do you think I want to remember? Remember that horrid site?! I could do nothing as I watched millions of people die. Do you think I wanted to see that?!
Hrothgr: Trying to calm Jasen down No, I don’t, but we need a total account of what happe-
Jasen: I could do nothing. angrily NOTHING! Raises hands in to air, lightning shoots out from finger tops and spreads around room, yells
Hrothgr: horrified What- are- you? Falls on ground A- a si- A Sith? dies
Jasen: in shock What have I done? I killed my best friend! I must leave, and train for the day I will protect this galaxy, only this time, I’ll fight on the dark side. leaves room
END SCENE

The sword was a left in prop from an earlier draft

Umm, not very far, I haven’t been asigned anything to write, I’ve been waiting for badger to tell me what to do. Still waiting…

I couldn’t think of anything to write, so it sucked, I know.

Two people won’t be able to write this script. If you guys would like to try again, send me another one, but I don’t want to start the script with writers who appear to be lower than the standard I want.

And Doc, you can just send me your best screenplay, or a part of it.

I’m going to try to recruit more people from BiM again for the script.

I wouldn’t call it a comedy, but more of an adventure film with comical elements.

If you could give me something short to write about, I could do good. I work better with an outline

Hm…okay. Write me up this scene:

The Queen is on a raised platform and says that they’ll never leave alive, and that they will be hunted until Edward is returned to her. They refuse to give up, and fight their way through the room, barely making it out alive. They just run away at this point.

They reach the last tunnel before the exit. Hundreds of monsters are behind them, unseen, only their voices letting the viewer know they’re there. Dash tells the group to run ahead, and he’ll hold off the monsters. Josh refuses to let that happen, and Dash replies, “What kind of knight would I be if I let you die? I’m a knight, a hero. And if I have that title, I need to live up to it.” Josh nods and understands that Dash needs to do this for himself. Josh, Rasputin and Edward run away while Dash stays to hold the monsters off.

The monsters come running at Dash, who begins fighting him. He holds them off for a bit, but is then overpowered. His fate is left unknown, but it is strongly implied that he dies here.

This part is meant to have action, but there is going to be some humor in there as well. Dash’s “death” is supposed to be emotional as well, so how well you pull that stuff off will help me determine if I want you.

Badger, this is meant to be for kids

–The Doctor