April 12, 2009 at 8:31 pm #407826
I’ll try to. I’ll probaly post it around 9 pm EST, if I can get on the computer, if not, I’ll post it at school the next day.
Perhaps, and this is just an idea with scripting, I coukld script the battle cesnes in a stroyboard like fashion, though I have no figres that would fit the theme, I caould always use my pirate swords and lightsabers as represenativeApril 14, 2009 at 12:21 am #407875April 18, 2009 at 2:22 am #407998
Setting: A cold, dark room, filled with mist, sword on wall
Characters: Jasen: A teenage Jedi Apprentice, present at destruction of Elxmri
Hrothgr: 14 year old Bothan, Jasen’s best friend
Jasen standing in middle of room, Hrothgr walks in
Hrothgr: Stops a few feet away from Jasen What are you doing here, Jasen? Points at Jasen You’re needed in the debriefing room. You’re the only one wh-!
Jasen: angrily Do you think I want to remember? Remember that horrid site?! I could do nothing as I watched millions of people die. Do you think I wanted to see that?!
Hrothgr: Trying to calm Jasen down No, I don’t, but we need a total account of what happe-
Jasen: I could do nothing. angrily NOTHING! Raises hands in to air, lightning shoots out from finger tops and spreads around room, yells
Hrothgr: horrified What- are- you? Falls on ground A- a si- A Sith? dies
Jasen: in shock What have I done? I killed my best friend! I must leave, and train for the day I will protect this galaxy, only this time, I’ll fight on the dark side. leaves room
The sword was a left in prop from an earlier draftApril 28, 2009 at 8:51 pm #408215April 29, 2009 at 12:14 am #408224April 29, 2009 at 1:26 am #408228
You will probably be waiting longer. As I said in the other thread, I’m still thinking over what I should do with the script.
“I” wrote: It still hasn’t been started, but that’s because I’m thinking of what I’m going to do about it because, to be honest, I wasn’t entirely pleased with the script submissions (sorry guys).April 29, 2009 at 1:39 am #408230April 29, 2009 at 4:00 am #408236
AnonymousApril 29, 2009 at 7:36 pm #408249
Two people won’t be able to write this script. If you guys would like to try again, send me another one, but I don’t want to start the script with writers who appear to be lower than the standard I want.
And Doc, you can just send me your best screenplay, or a part of it.
I’m going to try to recruit more people from BiM again for the script.April 29, 2009 at 8:08 pm #408250
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