TracerBullet
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Hello, i just completed a movie
Please give any comments on it
id really appreciate it
24 Hours Open – Convenience Store
Low Quality – 708kb
Med Quality – 1.33mb
Hi quality – 2.92mb
Any suggestions?
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Chris
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That was……….  …………interesting.
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strongest of the weak
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Agreed. That was a little…..whats the word I’m looking for? retarded maybe?…no, not retarded….sick? twisted?…not vulgar enough….how about frickin’ screwed up?…not that either. How about…WHAT THE CRAP????
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Flash1015
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Pay no attention to the first two post, I think the words they are looking for is, “it’s to short”
**SPOILERS**
you had it going well, but It’s to dang short.. Now the viewer will ask, what is the bad guy going to do next? or Did He Take the money, and When is the electrician going to fix that light??
I found the effects well executed, the lighting in the store was superb, the lighting all around was great!
NOW that you have the basics down, (walking, consistent lighting, ideas) you can now start working on stuff longer than 24 secs.
**END SPOILERS**
For a first movie I liked it. very nicely done.
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TracerBullet
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thankyou
for that constructive post.
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strongest of the weak
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I do agree with Flash. But also agree with Chris. You have to admit, that was pretty strange. Also thought the lighting was excellent.
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The Janitor
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As pointlessly violent as that was, the image quality, lighting, and sets were all very nice. The animation was fine too. I also liked the choice of music.
Very well done for a first film. I hope to see more, longer films from you.
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IndyA
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Well it seemed good animation…but if you are talking plot it was very short and basic…goodjob! 
IndyA
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Motfilms
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Well… The animation was very smooth. And the rest was just, well, twisted.
*Spoilers*
The music made it seem like it was going to be a friendly little movie, but then the guy goes inside and kills everyone :shake And next time, don’t use so many fades. You are a great animator, but you just need to think of a nice non violent plot!
*End Spoilers*
Tom
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TracerBullet
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hmm.
well. after all those suggestions
i made a few more scenes
in which he doesnt kill anyone..
When is the electrician going to fix that light??
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Flash1015
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Whoa Whoa Whoa, Hold on. Since when did Brickfilms turn into a Lovey Dubby Happy Tree Friends place?
There is no rule saying that TracerBullet cannot make a film that has blood, violence, or gore.
No, there is no such thing as too much gore. Let the
gibs fly!
Regards,
Jason
this was from an email I recieved from jason 2 years ago when I asked him about violence. So TracerBullet you are just fine with your film, continue making it (if you wish) Everyone is entitled to their opinions, But when people **COUGH IndyA COUGH** State that making violent films drops the moral of a lego, is Strictly opion and not fact..
I am sorry but I can’t go all day watching Care Bears and My little Ponies without a good Steven Segal film, or a Transformer (the Original!) episode.
And I have one more thing to add on to this discussion, Indy you like Indiana Jones right?? Of Course thats why you picked that name, so why do you find it Horrible to watch a lego movie with “off screen” and I say again “off screen” violence when in the Indy Films We watch Nazi’s Faces being melted in front of us? Oh wait I guess you fast forward those parts don’t you? But, if not… I ask again, whats the problem?
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Antiggo
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Hey, I liked that movie  The music fits very good in my opinion. The lighting was just PERFECT. Keep up the good work!
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RevMen
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“IndyA” wrote: someone who has so much hate in them to make a film like this must be evil too…….
Yikes! We’re talking about brickfilms here, right? Like, little plastic people with yellow heads? Let’s save acusations of evilness for more appropriate venues. Like international politics… :wink
I thought this film looked great! Not a whole lot of content, but what you do get to see is awesome. I would love to watch a proper length film with this visual quality, regardless of the subject, just as long as it isn’t incredibly boring. I have a feeling that if you do extend this film, being boring won’t be much of a problem.
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Erlic
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That was scary! But pretty well done!!!
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unfoldingmetal
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I would watch it but all I see is blackness. Anyone can help? Lol, I agree. All I heard was the music. Nice fluffy kindergarden music. Then I heard someone with a machine gun killing everyone! Screaming! Did you pick that music, to give it that sort of happy evil clown feeling?
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